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You ether forgot or were too lazy to put an actual game in there. Pleese don't do that too the people of newgrounds. I have nothing else to say to you:_(

armogedon responds:

you what?

try again

I could make something like this but to be a good tutorial you need completion and rarely used ideas. You have none of thouse but I know you can. I'm guessing you spent less than a day, or mabey even less than an hour on this. This will probably pass because over half the people on this site suppirsing don't even have flash, but, I think you should try again. and Next time don't stop until you truely don't know anything else and can't find anything else on all the other tutorials. This could be a very helpful guide. Next time also think about trying a diffrent name because 1. I know thats not everything you know, 2. I came into this tutorial knowing it would be bad, and 3. You need somthing short enough so that you can fit it without someone having to click on it first.

graphics: most of the buttons ether didn't line up, didn't work, or you needed to click on the letters insted of the buttons (that makes it hard)
style: its not like your the first person to make a tutorial
sound: I didn't relise but I have the computer muted so the zero might not be your fault
violence: uhhhh duh
interactivity: see graphics
humor: I liked the hippie dude.

hope this helps

rox0rz24 responds:

Thanks for the positive review. Erm...I don't really know what else to say. Thanks for the character feedback?

kk...

constuctive stuff
don't quote a question from something else

everything else:
134rt56 is the code
how do you join the kk?

Anubis responds:

Great.
NOw everyone send me all the answers and a screen shot of you completing it.
Other wise you wont be addeed.
And No you cant join.

very good

I got 300 points. I might play this game with real cards. If you made it up very imaginative, if not, still very good.

creekmonkey responds:

this is my take on an actual card game i seen and played years ago

very basic

Next time have a section for more advanced stuff. This was more like HTML for dummies. I'm sure a lot of people on this site know HTML to that extent. Also next time you should add background music from the portal, but also have a mute button. some of your text runs a little low and thats annoying. It would be better to just make two small pages instead. But overall it was a very good begining for anyone who whats anything to do with most other types of coding.

Scottishslayer responds:

Thanks for the positive criticism :) now I know where I can improve :P

yay

Finnally someone had the guts to make an arcade game that slightly diffrent! To be honest I muted the game so i don't know how good the sound was but imagin you couldn't have screwed it up. There was a glitch where the orange ball and the blue ball got attachedish but they both left the screen quickly so it wasn't a problem. I hated the bouncing just because it kept hurting me. I only played until level 2 but from what I played its really easy I hope you ave something to make it harder like faster balls, more balls, diffrent types, or all of the above, if you didn't already.

totemnee responds:

thank you first.

i have made some change .new face of
stone, and more difficult. hope you
like it .

watting for your more advice.

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